I wouldn’t bother going to NY unless you’ve got something lined up. At your age, your best bet will be found by searching for unpaid positions, or positions that are PWM, boutique research or back office. While they are not IB, they will provide you with some resume building experience and make for a nice stepping stone into more attractive internships going into your junior and, ultimately, senior years (rising junior and rising senior summers, respectively).

Regarding cold calling, you should definitely take that step, but given your age, you should probably stay local and push more for an opportunity to build your resume rather than a dream opportunity.

Additionally, it’s always a good idea to call on contacts, but you should only call on those you are very close with. Given the positions you are targeting, your age, experience, etc, you don’t want to reach out to all of your contacts so soon. For now, use friends and your closest contacts, then reach wider once you’ve built a bit of a profile/resume for yourself going into next summer or so.

Finally, while you will certainly find more luck heading down the previous avenues I’ve mentioned, far be it from me to squash someone’s go-getter attitude and drive. Absolutely cold call and send some inquiry emails to IBs as well – ideally smaller/boutique shops, merchant banks, and so forth that as local, but definitely take a shot. With a simple cold call or email the worst that happens is you don’t get the position – they won’t remember you next year if you show an interest again – no harm no foul, but with plenty of upside potential.

If an MD wants me as an spring intern (fall, spring), but HR is claiming they don’t do that, should I follow up and make another push? If so, how? Can MDs overrule HR?

MDs often have some clout, but not always enough to go bringing on interns. If you don’t need pay, one option would be to reach back out and ask if you could intern unpaid – essentially just for the experience. That could absolutely set you up for a nice SA position next summer as well.

Otherwise, perhaps there was some sort of a miscommunication either between you and MD or between the MD and HR or you and HR. I would re-trace my steps and touch base with the MD – briefly thank him again for his time and quickly explain what HR told you – then allow him to clarify or express his confusion and look further into the matter.

Why do you suggest removing “Dean’s List” as an honor from your resume if it is your only honor?

Although Dean’s List is an honor and something you’ve achieved, as a standalone it just takes up space and isn’t necessary since anyone with a 3.7 or so or better GPA is on the dean’s list. In other words, it’s not something you’ve been given or something you are being recognized for, but rather, it’s pretty much your status based on your GPA. The fact that you have the GPA is the accomplishment, not that you’ve made the dean’s list. If you have another honor, then feel free to mention it since you’ve got the line anyway, but otherwise, leave it out. You are better off with more free space and since it is implied based on your GPA, it won’t really do anything to help your candidacy.

As a DCM Investment Grade analyst, I want to move on to P/E, but without much modeling experience, how do I sell myself? I have structure knowledge and have worked on numerous deals, but as is the case in Investment Grade DCM, I haven’t dug that deep into them – the mile wide but inch deep saying comes to mind.

Without seeing your resume, the easiest general advice will be to focus on 2 things: 1) big deals you worked on even though the work will be more of the inch-deep in terms of modeling work, and 2) deals and projects you worked on that did involve modeling, strategy and documentation drafting. Investment Grade DCM is known to not have a ton of modeling work, so you will want to show modeling where you can. Specifically, showcase your limited modeling work, documentation work and so forth around your structuring knowledge to illustrate credibility to you claim and capabilities. Beyond that, you want to highlight some big deals in your resume and even cover letter, simply because this is a prestige business. Even though the work won’t be terribly substantial, doing some sort of quality work will aid your cause and if you can get an interview, you are well on your way – then it’s just a matter of selling yourself from a technical (which you seem to have despite limited modeling) and behavioral (no modeling necessary here) perspectives.

I’ve heard that boutiques are usually shadier than BBs and not as desirable to work for – is this true?

Boutiques are not “shadier,” although they are quite different than standard BBs. While a small boutique will not carry the same brand name as a BB, obviously, the work experience can still be very strong (and the experience can be very strong as well in terms of deal responsibilities: modeling, documentation work and so forth). MM shops are highly reputable, similar to that of BBs, and Elite boutiques (such as Lazard and Blackstone) are considered stronger than most BBs excluding GS and MS (although they are on the same level).

In short, if you are looking for a FT IB opportunity that will set you up to move out of IB and into P/E or other buyside, you are better off with BBs, elite boutiques and some MM shops. If you are looking for FT IB to stay in IB, then all are good and smaller boutiques could easily be preferable to many candidates given their interest in retaining and growing talent, rather than the 2-3 and out of traditional BB IB classes. Finally, for an internship, while name brand definitely helps, any IB is solid, especially before junior year summer, and even for junior year SA opportunities, a small boutique IB internship with relevant experience is better than zero IB experience.

Do I need an MBA to break into P/E from IB? Also, is the idea of pre MBA associate to MBA to post MBA associate reserved only to the Mega PE funds or are MM/boutique PE firms less rigid in their hierarchy?

For P/E, you don’t need an MBA if you come out of a strong IB. Whether a solid MM, or preferably, a strong BB or elite boutique. In this case, you can break into PE after your analyst stint and then it is up to you to grow and advance.

It’s not reserved to anyone, but if you don’t come from a top school and top elite boutique or BB, it will be very hard to break into megafund PE without the MBA. That said, it will be very hard to break in with an MBA as well – especially if your MBA isn’t from H or S.

For smaller and mid-sized P/E shops, it is possible to break in from a wider range of IB positions, but if you can’t find an avenue or want an MBA, it is possible to break into P/E from a top B school program as well. Additionally, those B school students who have previous IB or P/E experience will have, at least to an extent, an upper hand in P/E and V/C recruiting given their relevant backgrounds.

I want to get a letter of recommendation from my current MD from my internship for B school. The problem is I won’t be applying for a few years – should I just get a stock letter now?

Most top business schools don’t just require a generic “letter.” Instead, they have a series of questions that they want answered by the recommender. Although I’m sure your employer really likes you, it is just an internship and in 2-3 years time you should be able to find 2 people to recommend you that can call on more recent experiences.

Additionally, if you want to hedge your bets, simply keep in touch with the guy and if you want to use him, then just ask him and provide him with your accomplishments, and rough answers/information to answer each of the questions. For now, you can write a summary of your accomplishments and projects to keep for a few years down the line – if you decide you want to use him as a recommender, you can call on this summary to refresh his memory as to what you’ve done (assuming you’ve kept in touch). Here’s a bit more on B school to keep in mind as the time gets closer.

Now that we’ve covered what exactly the application-less position is, let’s jump right into the best strategy for not only applying to the companies, but also how to find the shops and how to reach out to, ideally, the right bankers at the shop. This question comes up quite a lot from my readers, so I’m just going to jump in and tackle the issue at hand. No, it’s not just a matter of praying for the right opportunities, but if you follow these steps, you’ll be well on your way:

Where Are The Firms?

First, you need to actually find some boutiques/shops in your area, a big city you are close to, or where you are planning to be or can be over, for example, the summer (assuming you are looking for a summer internship). Once you know where you will be spending your summer (or other internship period), you need to perform a broad Google search to find boutiques and shops in the area that you’re interested in applying to and ideally interning with. To be blunt, this will be the vast majority of shops that you find through your search in your area since, at the end of the day, your best bet, as is often the case, is to cast a wide net. Beyond a Google search, you can search popular IB forums and ask friends, your school career center, etc.

Who Do I Reach Out To?

Now that you’ve built up a sizeable list of boutiques to contact, you need to spend some time on each of their websites and find out a few things. First, you need to know what the boutique focuses on – what industry, types of transactions, size and so forth – not necessarily to be used on this step, but during later steps you’ll definitely want to know about the company you are claiming to have an interest in. Beyond the basics, search through each of the websites for any career sections, employment sections, internship postings, etc. If you happen to find any positions, take the opportunity to submit an application that way – if not, it’s time to move on. Keep in mind that even if you find an opportunity this way, you can still pursue the following steps as a means of further getting your name in front of some of the bankers of the company – showing enthusiasm is a good thing as long as you don’t take it too far thus becoming a nuisance.

Since the article is about the application-less application, I’ll assume most of you have sailed right past the closing point from the previous paragraph and are ready to apply despite the lack of an online application or website career section. Assuming the opportunity is not posted online, you should look for the company directory or “team” profiles link on their website, which usually, at the least, shows names and often contact info for VP bankers and up – which is what you need when you are considering submitting a letter of inquiry to the firm.

Now that you’ve found the list of bankers at the firm, and, ideally, some contact info (or at least a contact standard for the firm so you can deduce the email address for a particular banker) for the bankers, you need to go through each of the bankers’ bios provided by the firm to learn of any common ground you might have with them. For example, did you attend or do you attend the same undergrad he/she attended, have you interned in a field they previously explored, have you interned or do you have an interest in the same industry they focus on, if there are any hobbies listed, do you have any common hobbies, are you both from the same hometown or have dwelled in a similar (and unique) place (meaning, if you both lived in NY, who cares, but if you both come from a small town in Tennessee, for example, that is a common point). Essentially, you should be looking for anything that is a mutual talking point to establish some sort of a connection in that initial email with the banker – something to hopefully get him at least marginally intrigued and interested in sending a reply to you.

Now that you’ve searched through the database, there are two scenarios: (1) you found at least 1 person that you have something in common with, or (2) no luck finding the “link” person. If you can find someone who has something in common with you, that person should be your first contact person. If there happens to be more than 1 person, then the most recent common point is the best to touch on – for example, if you both have the same alma mater and you are currently a junior, then that is a better common point than a common employer 2 years ago for you and 10 years ago for him/her. If, on the other hand, you find yourself a victim of scenario (2) and can’t find anyone with anything in common with you based on the bios (which is often the case), then, in a matter of speaking, you will have to pick out the friendliest looking face, haha (which I’ve also done) – essentially aim for someone in a junior-senior role, meaning a VP or early D, and, if possible, someone that has grown in banking (meaning rose from associate up the ranks), as they might be a bit more receptive as they too would have been in the recruiting scenario at that point. In either case, whether you have a person to reach out to with some common points or not, you will want to reach out to the person of your choosing through an inquiry email (a letter of inquiry in the body of an email) and attach your resume. Yes, in this case, you should attach your resume.

I Really Include My Resume? What About The Inquiry Letter?

Here’s the thing; although I don’t usually recommend attaching your resume to the first email for numerous reasons, in this case there is no disguising your intentions. Simply put, you want an internship with his/her firm and need to not only put your best foot forward through a strong letter of inquiry, but also deliver a complete representation of yourself through a neatly pressed resume. Without attaching your resume to the email, you are only sharing a small snippet of your candidacy with your potential employer and hoping he/she is interested enough to ask for more instead of including your resume and giving your potential employer a more thorough, if not complete, picture of your candidacy. In the case of cold-emailing and applying to these types of positions, you have less than a first impression, you have nothing more than a faceless first virtual-impression, which absolutely requires putting your best foot forward.

Moving into the core of the application-less application, the inquiry email, you will want to treat it just as you would a well-crafted cover letter for an advertised opportunity you are interested in, but instead of applying for a specific position, you are targeting the letter to the broader goal of working for the firm. Essentially, just as you would in a cover letter, you will highlight your interest in the firm and why you are interested in it (attributes based on your quick research on the website), your professional and/or academic highlights, any extras you’d like to include and, finally, a reaffirmation of your interest in working with the firm, a thanks and expressing an interest in speaking to discuss potential opportunities (internship, analyst, IB, etc).

What If The Banker Doesn’t Respond?

Now as fantastic as your letter of inquiry highlights your skills and sells your candidacy, you are obviously not always going to receive a response (positive or negative since whether good or bad, a response lets you know which direction to take next). If, or rather, when, you don’t get a response from the first person you reach out to at firm X, you shouldn’t give up just yet. After several days (preferably a week to 2 weeks), you can try reaching out to 1 more person at the firm. If the boutique is a bit larger, you should send the letter to someone in a different group; if it is a tiny shop, then just take a chance and email someone else on the team, but especially in the case of the small shop, you need to be sure to mention to the second person that you had already reached out to person X (the first person you reached out to) without success, but you understand how busy schedules can become.

The application-less application is absolutely the toughest application path to tackle with success, but it can absolutely be done. Send me an email if you have any other questions. If you need assistance on cold calls, networking calls, and so forth, be sure to consider an interview and networking prep session. As always, leave comments below.

Parameters:

Let’s get right into the basics here. First and foremost, the cover letter should be, in total, 1 page. This means that from the address/heading down to the signature (and mention of attachments, if necessary), you should be no more than 1 page in length. I’ve seen cover letters that span over 2 pages, and let me be the first to tell you, straight up, this is way too long, and no one is going to read it, nor will anyone be excited by the amount of effort and/or information you’ve included in it. Simply put, this looks like you don’t know what to include and have therefore included way too much. So, we’ve got the 1 page down, but how should the 1 page look?

As you can imply from the name, the cover LETTER, is exactly that, a letter, and, as such, whether it is a separate attachment or the body of an email, it should resemble that of a letter. Start by including the basic information – essentially, your contact information and name at the top, then to whom you are addressing the letter – you don’t need a full address here, although if you’ve got the room, you are welcome to include it (this opening information can be left out if you are writing the letter in the body of the email, instead, just start with the next point, your greeting). Next, insert your greeting/opening – Dear Mr. XXX, or Good afternoon Ms. XXX (for non-email cover letters, you can also include the date just above this line if you want to and/or have room).

Moving past the opening and greeting, we get to the body of the letter. The body should be 3-4 paragraphs, although the last paragraph is a short paragraph, but we’ll get to that in a second. Paragraph 1 is the introductory paragraph, essentially, an introduction to you (school and major/current employer and role, etc – high level details only) and why you are interested in the specific opportunity with company X (the company and role to which you are applying).

Once you’ve got paragraph 1 done, you have paved the way for paragraph 2, which is essentially a continuation of the “introduction to you” in paragraph 1, but now with all details you want to highlight. Paragraph 2 should highlight your experiences with school and/or with your current/past internships/FT positions. Additionally, while you are discussing your experiences, you should briefly highlight their relevance to the position to which you are applying, especially if the relevant isn’t perfectly clear. For example, running the financial modeling of a closed deal as an IB analyst is obviously relevant to another IB position; however, being an engineering major, or even Finance major, or perhaps working in a corp fin role might not be and might warrant a quick few words on how the experiences are useful to IB.

Next, we come to our optional paragraph, paragraph 3, the extra stuff. Paragraph 3, just as the name implies, highlights other aspects of your candidacy that you feel are relevant and/or important to your candidacy, albeit not related to your professional or academic (major/coursework) experience. Paragraph 3 is where you will want to highlight your leadership, club involvement and non-profit experience. Paragraph 3 is a great opportunity to set yourself apart from other candidates and possibly even find some common ground with your prospective employer. Paragraph 3 can definitely be useful for those candidates applying to consulting positions, P/E and even smaller boutique IB shops in that these positions often look for what you’ve done besides grades and work, assuming, of course, grades and work are up to par. Additionally, paragraph 3 is often useful for those candidates that lack work experience, but have strong leadership experience, especially within relevant student organizations. Finally, while paragraph 3 can be helpful, it definitely isn’t necessary since: 1) you might not have enough room for it on your single page and you definitely don’t want to cut out important academic and/or professional experience to highlight something that is probably on your resume already anyway under a leadership or extracurricular section, 2) you might not have much leadership experience and you definitely don’t need a bunch of fluff in your resume and 3) many positions won’t really care that much about your EC experience and can find out what they need to know from your resume or from you in your interview – therefore, you can let your cover letter be a bit shorter and leave paragraph 3 out.

Finally, after all is said and done, we come to our last paragraph, paragraph 4. Paragraph 4 is a very quick paragraph in that paragraph 4 merely thanks the reviewer, mentions your attachments and contact information (phone and/or email) and closes out the letter.

With paragraph 4 done, you have your final lines starting with your closing remark (Sincerely, Best regards, etc) and then your name. If you want to, you can include an italicized line, 1 or 2 lines below your name (again, you want to keep it to 1 page) and call it “Attachments” or the like, and mention your resume – Ex. “Enclosure: Résumé”

Include it:

Now that we’ve covered the parameters and highlighted the major fields of your cover letter, let’s quickly run through what you should include in your cover as far as content is concerned. If you are a student, first and foremost you want to include some basics from your academia including your school, your grade, your major and any relevant coursework you have taken. When referring to relevant coursework (see Here for more), I am referring to the same coursework you would include in your resume – any finance and accounting coursework is at the top of the list, followed by math/statistics coursework, economics coursework, and, finally, any interesting strategy/leadership coursework. Moving beyond your undergrad basics, you want to include your club involvement, with a focus on those clubs that you have taken more of a leadership role in (especially those clubs relevant to IB – such as a Wall St. club, a Finance club, an IB or P/E club, etc). Finally, we come to your internship and non-profit experience. You definitely want to highlight any relevant work experience that you have as well as the interesting projects that you have worked on while there. If you have more than 1 quality internship on your resume, you can definitely highlight more than, but for each position/internship you list, you should include a little less experience/project responsibilities from each to keep the cover letter balance. For non-profit experience, I am referring to anything that is important to you or that you have taken a leadership in (for paragraph 3) and anything that is relevant to IB from a quant/analytical perspective (in paragraph 2 or 3 depending on how much additional work experience you have).

Now before anyone gets crazy, the previous paragraph is referring to undergraduate students or students in Master’s programs who don’t yet have FT work experience. Once you are a graduate, and have some FT experience under your belt, you want to change things up a bit. As a grad, you don’t need to include all of the information from your undergrad that you included as a current student unless you are applying for a position outside of your current FT role and your undergrad studies are relevant (meaning you work in IB and want to go into something completely different or the opposite). Assuming this exception isn’t the case, you don’t need to highlight all of your relevant coursework (although you can still keep it in your resume) and you only really need to mention your school, when you graduated, how you graduated (if it was with any honors) and what you majored in (although this last point isn’t necessary if it isn’t relevant to the position). From there, you want to delve fully into your current work experience first, and depending on how long you’ve been there and how many projects you’ve worked on, take the necessary space to highlight the position properly. After your current experience, you can briefly highlight one or 2 of your internships, again, if they are relevant, as well as a bit on what you worked on while there. The balance between FT and internships will, of course, vary, based on how long you’ve been at your FT role. Before I close out this article, let’s cover 1 last point – essentially, what not include in your cover letter.

Save it for the interview:

This section covers those points that, whether interesting or not, should not be included in your cover letter as they will be seen as more fluff, filler, or, at the very least, not relevant and when something is not relevant, it should not be included – remember, shorter is usually better (unless we were talking about a 3 sentence cover letter, in which case I would make an exception to the rule). First on the list is non-relevant coursework – essentially, if I haven’t listed it above, it is non-relevant. Yes, your history courses might be interesting, but they are probably not relevant. Therefore, if you want to discuss them, save it for the interview (see Here for help preparing for your next interview) and only if you are asked – don’t randomly go off on a 10-minute history course tangent. Next on the list would be non-relevant work experience. Included in this list is work experience that doesn’t involve leadership, analytical/quant skills or strong written skills. Essentially, you want to always be highlighting those experience that showcase the relevant skill sets sought after by bankers/potential employers. Finally, we come to the big no-no of cover letters and that is the dreaded overstatement (essentially, beefing yourself up too much). While you definitely want to be selling your candidacy, you also don’t want to pretend like you’ve done WAY more than you have, or taken on WAY more responsibility than you have (the same is ABSOLUTELY true for your resume). As a quick example, one of my friends from college was interning with a boutique IB shop the summer of his junior year and into his first semester. While he had an interesting experience and enjoyed his time with the firm, he really didn’t have much exposure to modeling – he spread some comps and such, but never really built any models. He had, however, seen some models and had taken some coursework in M&A and learned a bit about financial modeling and such. Well on his resume and in his cover letter, he figured that he knew enough to beef it up and decided to say that he built several DCF models and worked on several LBO models during his internship. While this seemed like a good idea at the time, he landed an interview with a BB and his first round interview was a technical interview and he got absolutely hammered on this experience and his financial modeling including his supposed DCF and LBO work. Suffice it to say that he did not do very well and did not get called for a second round.

That about does it for this article – as always, comment go below and emails can be sent Here!

Make sure your contacts are updated and saved in your blackberry and an Excel backup

This sounds like a no-brainer, but you’d be surprised by how many people forget to do this, or, worse, forget that their blackberries and corporate laptops actually belong to the corporation, and are taken back upon displacement. If your blackberry is yours, make sure all of the information is up to date, if it is not (either way, really), make sure all of the information is backed up in an excel file and that you’ve got it if you need it. Regarding which information should be saved – think of all of the basics: name, cell and work phone numbers, address (whether office or home), email address (corporate and personal if you have both, but at least corporate), company (especially if it’s a client contact and not a bank contact), position (analyst, VP, etc) and group (Leveraged Finance, M&A, Industrial Growth, etc – if applicable – if it’s a client, it might not be relevant). Additionally, you want to make sure that the spelling of the first and last name and email address is correct as I have spelled names wrong in the past and wonder why the hell the email wasn’t going through. Finally, as one additional point of interest to keep record of, although not by any means essential, for each contact (at least in your Excel file, where you will have more room), you can keep any talking points such as mutual interests, deals you’ve worked on together, and how you know the person (whether through someone, just through deals, etc) just as talking points and points of reconnection for the future.

Slowly get your name back on the street

I stress slowly here for two reason: 1) you don’t know if you are even going to be displaced, and if you are not, you might not be interested in putting out all of the feelers, giving off that impression and then not following through, and, more importantly, 2) you don’t want your current employer to find out that you are looking for other opportunities, leading them to believe that you are interested in leaving, which, needless to say, is a good way to ensure that you are part of the headcount reduction. The best way to slowly get your name out there is to follow a similar procedure as when you are looking to internally Make the Group Switch. Essentially, start slowly and quietly – reach out to contacts at perhaps a few other firms and put out the feelers. However, let your contact know that you are sensing layoffs, so want to get a preliminary interest – in other words, keep it quiet as you don’t want to guarantee a boot in the ass out the door.

Backup your deal-related work on a flash drive

This is sometimes a bit of a touchy topic depending on the bank, and depending on how comfortable you are with this, but if you get the opportunity, I would definitely recommend uploading, if nothing else, the work you’ve done on any of your closed deals. It’s often tough to remember all of the little details of a project, especially 6 months down the line when you are interviewing and asked about cash flows, discount rates, schedules, etc and by backing up your models, pitchbooks, etc on a flash drive you’ve now got the ability to look back on your projects ahead of your interviews to refresh your memory on any important deal-specifics so that you’re not caught off guard if those technical questions come out. I believe in being prepared for any situation and if you don’t have access to the specifics of your closed transactions it will be very hard to articulate exactly what you worked on, how you were able to perform it, and issues that came up and the ultimate resolutions – and all of this is definitely helpful during an interview and will definitely help to set you apart from those candidates that can only provide “high level” summaries of their transactions or less.

Considering this is often an intimidating task for many, there is an alternative. The alternative is to take hard copies of your documents – print out your models, pitchbooks and IMs, if nothing else, and keep them for your records. Of course you don’t need to print everything out at once, but start early, and over time working on printing out your transaction-related relevant docs for your records. Of course, this will require that you can keep the documents together, neatly, and in a safe place so that they aren’t thrown out, ripped up, or mixed up. I’d recommend starting folders at your house, just as you would in your cube, for each transaction. It won’t have the flexibility or convenience of the flash drive, but it is just as good for a quick review at your house ahead of an interview.

Look into filing for unemployment

This is definitely a point that people often ignore either because they assume that they will be able to find another position very quickly, or because they are, well, embarrassed that as an investment banker they would even need to consider unemployment. Put your egos aside and focus on the market and your finances, not your pride. There is nothing wrong with looking into the process, how long it takes to actually kick into action, how much you’d get and how long you’d be entitled to it. All of these issues matter, and if you take the proper steps early on, you will have one less thing to worry about if, in fact, the cut does come. Preparing yourself for the unemployment process can take at least a small measure of the stress off of you if you find yourself out of work and in need of finding a new employer. You may not ever use your new knowledge or need it, but when and if that cut ever comes your way, it is nice to have the knowledge ready to take immediate action and at least get some money into your pockets until you land that next position.

Polish the resume and cover letter

I’m thinking that this is a no-brainer, but in my experience it is often the “no-brainers” that I need to remind people of the most. By polish the resume and cover letter, I don’t just mean make or edits, or add a line to your current position, I mean fully revise your resume. In other words, look into your past deals, current projects, responsibilities, and so forth, and make sure your new resume fully explains all of these aspects of your current position. Next, look to all of your past experiences and see if anything there can use some rephrasing, some tweaking, or some deleting – if you are adding new experiences, you will probably have to cut some of the old – start with college-related activities and those not directly related to banking that may have helped you get the gig 2-3 years ago, but don’t matter nearly as much as your current projects. A past internship in a different field, college club involvement can be truncated to fit on a single bullet point towards the bottom of your resume (Organization – Dates – Position, such as Finance Club of XXXX – September XXXX to May XXXX – Treasurer) instead of 3-5 lines on your resume in your “Leadership” section where you describe your activities, etc. Remember, after a few years of experience your resume should usually be leading off with a strong work experience section, then move on to your education section (which is not already full, can be the new home of your club involvement as described above) and then whatever is left such as Hobbies, Skills, Interests, Volunteer Work, etc, depending on how much room you have left – but don’t short-change your professional experience to fit an extra Leadership or Hobbies bullet point.

Beyond the resume, your cover letters will have to be redone as well. Essentially, take the same approach here as with your resume. You should have much more strong work experience here than before, so you need to incorporate all of that into the body of your letter to demonstrate your strength as a candidate. Even if your cover letter is not read, at least it’s there and illustrates all of your capabilities as an outstanding analyst/associate, rather than having some outdated or sloppy letter that doesn’t, in all honest, do your candidacy any justice. Take the time while you’ve got it and are still getting paid to put together a strong cover letter – you can always come back and fine-tune it whenever you need it, but you need to clearly articulate your new experiences and skill set.

I know that reworking the resume and cover letter can often be difficult. Sometimes adding new experiences, etc is hard – finding the right phrasing and such, but many times deleting past experiences, etc is harder in that we are all connected to out experiences and can see the merit in them and how they have enhanced and continue to shape who we are. If you’re having difficulty letting go or finding the right way to express something, feel free to drop me an email Here and let me know. No, I’m not pitching my resume revision service by any means, but I can definitely understand the difficulty and have no problem helping you along with cleaning up a few points on your resumes (as I already do, so I guess that it’s really nothing new).

As always, comments go below and emails can be sent right Here. There are many more articles coming so stay tuned and if you have any suggestions for my articles or for the site in general, let me know!

Rather than surprise everyone, I have decided to let everyone know that starting early January, my resume and cover letter services will be taking a small step up in price. I haven’t made a final decision yet on the specifics of the resume, cover letter and combination package, but I know that the price will be going up. When I first released the service, I had mentioned that the price was going to step up at some point in the near future, and have decided that the New Year shall be the start of the new price. It will not be a large jump, as I understand that funds are often tight for students and career switchers (my readers in general), but a small boost is essential. I was initially going to just raise the price, but I have decided to give all of you the heads up and about a week’s notice or so, before setting the new price into motion.

In addition to the price increase for the service, I will also offer a higher cost service that will allow purchasers to have their resumes/cover letters completed in an expedited fashion. In other words, if the normal queue is about 2-3 weekends at that time, the expedited purchaser will have their queue times dropped to about 1 weekend or so. Rather than buy this service, if you are interested, I would recommend that you first shoot me an email to find out what the queue time is for regular and expedited services as there will be down times when standard queue is roughly one weekend, and others when I am backed up with standard queue times at 3+ weekends, or expedited queue times of 2 weekends or so. Hopefully this doesn’t complicate the process much and will allow people that need the service done quicker for a resume drop deadline, to meet their deadline.

Also, bear in mind that the expedited queue time will not push everyone on the standard queue back. The times that I quote generally provide me with sufficient time to complete your resumes, so an expedited resume would be moved up, but not in front of someone who is already approaching their due date – in other words, I will not tell someone that their resume will be ready by next week and then back them up 3 weeks for an expedited purchaser – I probably don’t have to say it, but I don’t want anyone to worry that purchasing the regular service will yield a lesser product or be continuously delayed – my quoted times will still hold true and the quality will absolutely not diminish.

Now, getting beyond all of the product junk, let’s get into the meat of the article, a few quick notes for holiday readers:

1. Don’t reach out to your new contacts, make cold calls or inquire into potential opportunities during these two weeks (meaning before the week of Monday January 4th). Yes, it is definitely exciting to have opportunities, email addresses, etc, ready to go, but let them burn a hole in your pocket for a few more days. There are two reasons for this: 1) most people that are important to the decision making/interview processes are out of the office, and 2) those that are stuck in the office are definitely busy and are probably not in the best mood to deal with new people, cold calling, etc. If there is one thing worse than being forced to work over the holidays, it is getting networking or cold calls when all you are trying to do is finish up and get home. Wait for the New Year and, in my opinion, wait until about Tuesday or so of that week back to give your new contacts a bit of time to get back into the swing of things.

2. Although not the best time to reach out to new contacts, now is a great time to reach out to your current contacts and wish them a happy and safe holiday (as well as catch them up on a few quick things in your life). Even if you are afraid that the contact has gone a bit cold, this is the perfect avenue to reach back out and warm it up again. If you don’t get a response, who cares, you weren’t going to get one anyway. If you do, then even better, now the contact is back and fresh, and if you need anything in the near future, you can begin to massage it again. A quick happy holiday email is a great way to talk about your updates briefly, wish them a happy holiday, and then ask a few questions to keep the email going (not necessarily internship or opportunity questions, but rather questions on how things are going with them, the group, etc).

3. And finally, save the presents for your friends and family. I have been asked, quite a few times, whether it is acceptable to send high up bankers, senior professionals, etc small presents or the like (such as coffee mugs, a holiday basket or other trinkets) along with a resume and cover letter. Although this might sound like a good idea, I would keep this one on the shelf. You are much better off sending the holiday email, perhaps sending a personal hand-written card (if you really want to send something concrete to the office), or just waiting until after the holidays to try and get the networking phone call. Sending gifts often sends the wrong message and leaves a bad impression, if it even reaches the person you are trying to send it to in the first place. Stick to the phone calls and emails – leave the coffee mugs for your distant cousins.

That about covers it for this installment; stay tuned for upcoming articles on what to do when sensing layoffs, a day in the life, more reader questions and much more! I hope everyone has a very happy New Year and, of course, keep reading!

A successful resume will impress the reviewer through a subtle placement of powerful action language, clearly convey your career progression and accomplishments in an organized manner, and depict your ability to excel in and contribute to each position that you have held. A bad resume will all but guarantee that you never get that shot, and, ultimately, never get the job that you really want and deserve. I’m not promising you an offer with every employer to whom you send your resume, but I am offering you a tool to land more interviews and better opportunities, which should result in more job offers (assuming your interview skills are on par, but that’s another topic). Can you really afford to turn your back on job offers, and hundreds of thousands of dollars, yes hundreds of thousands of dollars, in foregone salaries because you chose to settle for your 2nd, or more realistically, 5th or 9th job choice?

[Do the math – assume in an average banking year (think modest bonuses, instead of huge or zero levels), a 1st year will take down $90k, a 2nd year earns $105k and a 3rd year earns $135k, which totals $330k. Now assume you don’t get the IB job and accept a back office style role in a small shop paying $50k per year – after 3 years, that would be $150k. While $50k per year is definitely a solid salary, the difference between the two is $180k – even if you assume worse numbers in banking, you are still looking at a difference, all in, of about $150k over just 3 years.]

Below is a sample resume I received, before and after revision, for your consideration.

Sample Resume Before Revision

Sample Pre Revision

Sample Resume After Revision

Sample Post Revision

I know that times are tight right now, and everyone is trying to cut a few corners and save some cash, which is why when I revamp your resume I am including free checks and tweaks. If you don’t like something, or want to add a few stats, a hobby, change some language, adjust an experience or the like, just send it back, let me know what’s bothering you, and I’ll take care of it – no problem. So rather than dance around the specifics, here is the approach and process when revamping your resume/cover letter.

Specific process:

1. You buy the service through the Paypal link below (or on the resume product page, Here).

2. You send your current resume and/or cover letter, name, email address and receipt number (if you have it) to me at IBanker@BankonBanking.com.

3. You send any additional attributes, work experiences, responsibilities, education credentials, hobbies, skills, etc, that you want to see in your new resume.

4. I will combine everything given to me, reformat the template on which your resume is built, and then revamp the language, sentence structure, descriptions and overall presentation of your resume.

5. I will send it back to you for review, and then the fun begins – we will now go through it together via a short consultation to discuss your thoughts and opinion and where you’d like to see a few more tweaks and edits, if any.

6. Your resume will be sent back to you with the aforementioned changes, and you are ready to send it out to recruiters, staffers and potential employers. If in the future, or even immediately after receiving it, you decide you want to add something else, or change something, you can ask me to review your changes or have me make the changes (although the former will generally be much quicker – as it will not be placed in the queue for resumes and other future products to be completed).

7. Enjoy! Now start sending it out, and realize your full potential; achieve your goals; break into investment banking…and thrive!

For this all-encompassing resume service, I am only charging $105, but keep in mind, as more people continue to take advantage of this opportunity, I may have to adjust the price so that the quality of work isn’t lessened due to the increase in quantity of demand. Additionally, I will offer my cover letter service for just $95. As an added bonus, I will revamp your resume and cover letter as a package for just $175 if purchased at the same time. A resume is often your one shot to impress the people responsible for offering you employment. In this market, you cannot afford to leave things to chance and blindly send out an ineffective resume – you just won’t receive the attention that you will need to break into this business. So dust off your resume, send me an email, and get ready to break into investment banking!

Resume Revision – $105

Cover Letter Revision – $95

Resume PLUS Cover Letter Revision – $175

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